the parting of ways2

OK. I am proud of this. Not because it is really awsomely good or anything (it is not) but because I figured something out and I think it looks good. lemme know what you think.

the original is here....[link]

model:

edit: ok i added the border. what do ya think? did it work? I think I got the crack down...but i still need to work on the aging.